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PO# 585786
India
India
Just one drop of word And writing flows as oceans Unstoppable And soothing. - Adwitiya
November 6, 2016
 

1. Every Diwali, he would make beautiful rangolis but Ma would tell everyone that his sister made it.

2. "So who made these beautiful rangolis?"

Before he could say anything, Ma gave all the credits to his sister.

3. "So who made these beautiful rangolis?"

"I..." He tried to say.

"His sister made them and he helped."

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November 6, 2016
 

She: I am so tired. Three dance  shows in one day.
He: Just one more picture. Pose.
She: Aren't you tired?
He: If you are into something, I am in it too.

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November 5, 2016
 

"I want a son." Ma said.
Naina smiles.

Two loners in a house did this throughout their life.

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November 5, 2016
 

She doesn't know how it feels to have a husband or a son.

It's her daughter only who's been protecting her.

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November 5, 2016
 

"I won't miss you at all."
She teased.

"Did you have lunch today?" He asked.

"Yes." She lied.

'Don't you miss me?"
"No."
"Did you have lunch today?"

"Yes." Said her growling stomach.

Which version is better? :)

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November 5, 2016
 

Writing makes fleeting life to transcend.

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November 5, 2016
 

They watched in awe as the magic happened before their eyes.

First the stars, then the moonset until  sunshine woke them up.

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November 5, 2016
 

Girls are a blessing to the world.
Don't you think so?

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November 4, 2016
 

Writing is like weather.
It just happens
Anytime of the day

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November 4, 2016
 

Just as the stars appeared in the sky.

Two people in their balconies twinkled smiles.

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November 4, 2016
 

As stars appeared in the sky, she knew he was there in his balcony.

The stars were alarms for them to exchange smiles.

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November 4, 2016
 

As the balloon drifted away into the sunset, he knew she was in the terrace.

As stars appeared in the sky, she knew he was there.

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November 4, 2016
 

As the balloon drifted away into the sunset.

The  terrace saw them drift apart in their last meeting.

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November 4, 2016
 

As the balloon drifted away into the sunset, he knew she was in the terrace.
But when he went there.
She also drifted apart.

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November 4, 2016
 

Writing is like someone gathered all your tensions and crushed them.

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November 4, 2016
 

"So what do you want as a wedding gift?"

"My wife's surname."

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November 4, 2016
 

He sniffs and flowers get inside his nostrils.

Trampled flowers found its vase in a dog.

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November 4, 2016
 

As tears streamed down her eyes.
Happiness made its way.

But the eyes
The eyes never forgot the tears
Nor the lost lashes
Nor the lost color
Nor the red sclera
Nor the salty taste

Yet gulped it down forever.

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November 4, 2016
 

I have found sadness in between happy words.
I have found love in between hatred.
I have found happiness in between tears.
I have found when I have lost.
Things never are lost.

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November 4, 2016
 

As tears steamed down her eyes.
Happiness became clearer.

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November 4, 2016
 

Even if I don't say or show.
It's all in there
in my eyes.

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November 4, 2016
 

Poem: I am on the other

Born with flaws
Born with imperfections
I became flawless
And made my own perfections
People don't see me
But a light
That's shining too bright
That they are unable to look at
Yet can't take their eyes off
To know the mystery.

Because everytime I talk
Everytime I walk
They stop and watch
And follow
While they are busy and lost in their path
I am on the other.

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November 4, 2016
 

Just one drop of word
And writing flows as oceans
Unstoppable
And soothing.

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November 4, 2016
 

Song name - Ain't getting place

You think you know me
You think I am easy
You think you just got it there
But baby you keep on knocking on the wrong door
It's locked
Yes, I have locked my heart
The key is in my brain
In a place that I don't even know
No matter how hard you try
You ain't getting any place.

Last time when the room broke down
I got it fixed
I made it new, schatzi
It's in control
I rearranged it
It has walls now
No matter how much you push
No matter how hard you try
You ain't getting any place

So you better take away your heart and eyes
I just need your shoulder.

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November 4, 2016
 

Song/Poem: Hey, Little Schatzi!

Hey little schatzi,

Bring up your eyes,
Into the mirror,
You head as higher,
It's born that way,
See no flaws,
See no differences,
It's you.
Nobody's like you.
You're unique.
What else you want?

I see your eyes on dreams,
Your hands with sweat,
But hey, don't your dare look down
And hang your head low,

Hey little schatzi,
Go high and blast everyone.

It's not that you can't do.
It's because only you can.
It's not that you won't.
It's because you will have to.

Schatzi, I see you there.

Hey little schatzi,
You know where you belong.

Hey little schatzi,
Don't go around with that look.

You need to give away your doubts and questions.

You can have it all....

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November 4, 2016
 

He: What miracle are you waiting for in your life?
She: To be the woman, I have always dreamt of being!

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November 4, 2016
 

"You may now kiss the bride."

She leaned and kissed her.

"I can't believe this is happening." She said.

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November 4, 2016
 

She went to all his places to find him.

Hopeless she sat on her terrace, as the air blew  harder,

'Hi!' He said.

It was truly a mystery how he found her.

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November 4, 2016
 

I have locked my heart.
The key is inside the brain
In a secret place that I even don't know.
No matter how hard you try,
You ain't getting a place.

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November 3, 2016
 

As the school bus started to move.

'Stop!' says mother catching her breath, 'You forgot your tiffin.'

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